lunes, 20 de mayo de 2013

WRITING A STORY

 A MEMORABLE TRIP


 It was a trip I´ll never forget. We were feeling very excited when we got  into a bus. I was at the kindergarten . It was crowded, We were about 30 children and two teachers. We were going to the farm singing and eating. My teacher had decided to go to the farm because of the end of the year.
 
I found the trip amazing because I had never been to the farm before. And We were seing cattle, pigs, sheep, goats and other animals you don´t see every day even a cocodrile.

Anyway, after We had luch, We went to the pigpen in order to fed  and milk the catlle. There were some horses near there and while I was milking the caw I heard a shout, it was my friend, the horse kicked her because She had been pulling it tail. Then the ambulance came, We had to come back to the school, We were all dissapointed and  concerned at the same time. My friend spent some time in the hospital. Until now we are still friends and she has the scar on his face. All in all, it was a wonderful trip.

2 comentarios:

  1. profe me pase un poquito.. es que no pude omitir nada.

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  2. WELL DONE! A
    We were seing cattle (WE SAW..)
    in order to feEd - pulling itS tail

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